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I break down,
into a pool of tears,
please come, take my hand,
help me face these fears,
I'm a dark, dark shadow,
broken in half,
walking through the meadows,
feel the freezing draft,
I look to the ground,
it looks back at me,
it seems that way,
it can definitely see,
as it looks through me,
a presence intrudes me,
pursues me,
alludes me,
all in all confuses me,
I twitch in the cold,
trying to shake it out,
I itch as I'm told,
I'm lost in a shout,
I fall down hard,
to the ice cold ground,
lost in the dark,
with no-one around,

In a breakdown,
with no help to stop me,
I'm so lost now,
the cost now is high,
In a breakdown,
with nothing to guide me,
how do I help me,
how do I pick myself up,
In a breakdown,
now it's hard to see,
the barriers of life,
and the barriers of death,
In a breakdown,
now it's hard to see,
exactly what I have left.

Uttering,
from the cold dark shadows,
a voice of metal arises,
with devices, of metal,
but so invisible,
it hurts to think it's there,
I'm hurt,
but I carry on,
fixed on the idea,
of not being wrong,
I try hard,
but I'm still there,
scared to hear my swan song,
It's the start to a song that I may or may not finish....
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Phobicangels23 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I know this feeling...beautiful song.
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RichardKail Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Thank you so much! :) I'm glad you could relate.
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist
i hope you do finish it this is wonderful
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RichardKail Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
That gives me more drive to actually finish it... Thanks! :)
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist
Anytime =)
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